Thursday, May 28, 2009

Prewrite

1. What is a problem/issue that our entire student body (our school, community, country, etc.) faces today?
too many students at Eastview High School are not being able to express themselves in their day to day dress because many are afraid of the judgement they will get from their peers or groups of friends. So many conform to just wearing the similar things.

2. What is your view/position on the problem or situation?
people should not be afraid to "branch" out or try different and BOLD things that they like. It will be easier for them to express themselves and they wont feel like they have to conform to the looks or fashions of others.

3. What would you like to achieve with your editorial? (What is the desired result?)To persuade people that it is really okay to be bold and go all out. To find that they will feel a bit more at ease with themselves and everyone else.

4. How will you persuade your audience to adopt your viewpoint as theirs? List at least 4 persuasive points.
Suggest fashion magazines.
Express the point that fashion is not just a feminine thing but guys can really get into it too. (breaking the sterotypical idea)
It will be less expensive. Adopting ones own style is cheaper because your money is being spent on more than one thing. or you get more for your money.
shop at places like vintage markets or downtown boutiques, things that attract their eye but would never really wear.

5. How will you motivate your readership to action in your conclusion?
we could tell people about what we are wearing and where we bought it from.

6. How will your editorial serve a public purpose?
it will persuade people to not care about the general publics ideas or opinions

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